Dead End Street

When he woke up

This afternoon

He thought the world

Was ending soon

He packed his bags

Ran out the door

Only to find

That all he bore

Was the heavy weight

On his shoulders

And the rotten smell

That still lingers

The results of

His twisted mind

The certain end

Of all mankind

So he stopped

And slowly fell

Down to the floor

Way down to hell

The only thing that he will find

Is the pain deep in his soul

Something that will make him blind

Never again will he feel whole

Just wishing he could forget

What happened on this planet

 

Reviews

[Y-27]

this feels so isolating, hopeless, i love it.

[Wunderlich]

Hm, it seems to be about someone who has is unstable and has done some things that he shouldn't have done, and is now being punished as the world comes to an end or something of the sort. Written very well, love the flow of it.

[LlamaLord]

This really made me think about what he might be going through. I had to read it twice... My guess is that hes sort of a lonely guy and a bit unstable. Very well written!