Special Cave? (Short Story)

Special Cave? (Short Story)

A Story by UnKnowGuy
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Hey there. This story i wrote under 1 hour i didnt use any . , so sorry if it's annyoing you. And also i might have grammer mistakes : /

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Our story begins in small town.

A group of people want to explore more and more land one day when they went on adventure they discovered a cave once they entered the cave. Bob notice there is something wrong with this cave he told his friends but his friends ignored him and kept going and exploring. They found a chest they all hoped it was a treasure with gold and diamonds, Bob said "Maybe it’s a trap" His friends ignored him again and said "Bob we came here to explore of Crouse there is a risk in it if you want you can go back home". Once they opened the cave Bob heard footsteps and he said "Mistakes were made" bob and his friends got scared so they ran away out of the cave fast as possible But it wasn’t enough they woke up the monster Luckily the monster was tired so it's stop chasing them and went back to sleep. One of the people stole weird looking object the object had numbers writing on it once they touch the object they got send forward in time and fell off the sky in a small town immediately people point gun on them and asked who are you?!. Bob answered we just got teleported to this place and fell of the sky I think we went entered time machine and went traveled forward in time. The people said No way we have been waiting for you guys for so long. Bob and his friends were confused and then one of the people told about the prophecy that few people will fall off the sky and save earth from all of the aliens. Bob and his friends were shocked and they asked how can we defeat them?. The people said we kept few object for you guys but the aliens stole it and holster it security place we need to get into it! They gear up and took a alien space ship they got into the security place in a seconds like ninjas they stole a thing that can kill all of the aliens In 1 second but that thing need to charge up and it's going to take a lot of time The aliens came and fought the humans only our heroes were left alive all of the others sadly died they Fought so hard and killed so many aliens the charger was on 99% the 1% left felt like 1 year Bob : It's got to 100% OMG! Jim :  WHAT DO YOU WAITING FOR ?!?! ACTIVE IT! Bob : okkk *Big Boom* *All of the aliens were vanished* Our heroes sadly died but they saved the earth and all of the other people that survived the aliens invasion.  

© 2016 UnKnowGuy


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Great plot! Simple, but quick to the point... Keep up the good work...

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