Beautiful creature

A glance through the mind of the creator. His precision and utmost perfection crafting works exactly as intended. And with so much love.

From that beautiful, long, slender fingers
So quick to work, precise and intentional
Spontaneous wonder, without course yet purposeful
Was wrought a beauty,
Not a mirage of the intended
But exactly the supposed

Palms uncalloused
With absolute care
Moulded, chiseled and dusted
A fine creature
Like in the hands of a child
Threads are knitted in directions that have no course
With perfect meaning

Eyes without waterfalls
With intensity of gaze
They beheld
They did behold
The marvellous work of their hands
Like the first time a new born babe beholds its mother
With eyes of adoration

Lips storing no fluids
Plush and immaculate
Breathed on the craft;
Which became alive with the single breath
Like a lover wooing his beloveth
They whispered
I love you.

Author's Note

This is my very first work officially going public. I hope to get better from the reviews you make. Thank you.

Reviews

[Cynthia umunna]

We will realise how really precious we are to the ultimate artist who formed beautiful creatures like us.

[Relic]

I believe this was crafted with as much love as your subject. You did a fine job on this. You might want to take the 's' out of the word fingers in the first line. Other than that, welcome to WC. :)