Screw you Picasso!

Run!! Its the attack of the insecure RUN-ON SENTENCE!!!!

Screw you Picasso

Who do you think you are!

You think you can scribble a buncha triangles and curly-Q cursive Europeany words on a canvas, charge a million dollar for it to impress me BAHHH I don’t get it BAHH maybe I could see this picture a smootzy uptown coffee shop OOuuuuuuAAAAAhh I hate coffee anyway, I don’t drink coffee!! Look at you! Whatever! You know I could be smart too!

I mean like….

I could be all artsy fartsy too if came from a good family that told me all my BULLCRAP crayon drawings were soooo amazing and sent me to fine schools, and paid my rent, and bought a me car, and did my laundry, and like told me I was special BAHH, but I got to WORK, I got to feed myself oh sure yeah I can go to Community College and get ed-jama-caTED that's all the same right! NO! Stupid rich kids can learn about all the fascinating things of the world, they drive cars I’ll never sit in, make love to women that I can not even look at, eat food a can not even smell…..WHATEVER I COULD BE SMART if I wanted too.  If I wanted to I’d be in a suit at some huge cocktail party in some big mansion telling anecdotes of humour and guile as twirl my martini glass toward the aristocracy, and THRUST CONTENTS IN THEIR FACES.

YEAH….

Picasso, I don’t see what is so special about YOU. So forgive me if I don’t have mental apt to appreciate

Oh wha…what’s that……

Is that a guitar??.....I like GUITARS….yeah that looks kinda cool

Maybe I was a little rash

Author's Note

I was just looking at a graphic novel of famous artists which triggered this passive aggressive spark in me. I'm sorry to Picasso for being the target of my disappointment. I could have been anyone

Reviews

[Trigorin]

Not bad, but you've got a massive run-on sentence in the middle of the piece. Suggest you rework that.
All kidding aside, I do somewhat question whether or not the sentence really makes sense in the context of the piece. I understand what you're trying to go for but I feel as though you could achieve that same uncaring attitude differently and have it come off more attractively. Just an opinion.
Other than that, fun little piece. Well done.

[Colt 45 & 9/16]

Thanks. I wanted to have the run-ons in there for a rambling effect more than the actual literal importance. But if it is unclear or not nessasary I should deffinately revise, revise revise. Thanks Allot!

[Sami Khalil]

"YEAH….

Picasso, I don’t see what is so special about YOU. So forgive me if I don’t have mental apt to appreciate

Oh wha…what’s that……

Is that a guitar??.....I like GUITARS….yeah that looks kinda cool

Maybe I was a little rash"

A very good rant and rave...Thank you for sharing...:)...................

[Chris]

a "selfie" rant. An interesting start.

[Michael Stevens]

Calm down; an excellent write; breath!

[Colt 45 & 9/16]

Thanks! I'll try!