He didn't seem right.

i hope you enjoy this little story :)

Hi My names Michael. I'm going To tell you A story about my friend. It started on a Friday Night.He came to sleep over. His Mum and dad Were going to his aunties for the night.

Ryan Stepped into My house.He look at me as he didn't know me.He stared deep into my eyes.Ryan was quite small for his age.He had big blue eyes.He was also skinny and always wore a big red watch.But today he wasn't wearing it. He stepped into the living room and sat on the couch."got anything to eat?" Ryan asked me. Normally Ryan was quite shy.He seemed...Different.I led him into the kitchen.He opened the fridge and grabbed the carton of milk and drank it out of the carton.I watched him in amazement as he drank it all.I carried his case up to my room and put it next to my bed.He Picked up the TV remote  and turned it on. He put it on a foreign channel and sat down.He watched it with  his wide eyes.After an hour we had to go to bed.I got changed and asked "aren't you getting changed?"

"no" He replied

I pulled my blanked up to my chin and started to drift to sleep.

During the night I heard Ryan get up,I looked at my clock.2 O clock in the morning.I watched him go down stairs.I slowly followed him.I waited for Ryan to go down stairs then looked from the top of the stairs.He opened the front door and walked out. I went back upstairs and put my shoes and coat on.I walked down stairs and walked outside.

I saw him half way down the road.Was he sleep waling?. No. He turned into a alley way.

I followed him.I ran and hid behind a bin.He stood there.The stink was unbearable. 

He UN buttoned  his top and took it off.His skin was scaly and green.I watched as he took of his shorts. A long green tail popped out.My heart was in my mouth.I couldn't Breathe.He slowly Grabbed his chin and pulled his skin off.I gagged once or twice.His teeth were long and sharp.His eyes were deep and red.He grinned and let out a load growl.He walked towards me.His tongue Shot out like a snakes tongue. I hid behind  the bin and got out my phone.I rang My mum.She didn't answer.I started to panic.I waited for Ryan...I mean It, To go away. I got up and ran To Ryan's aunties.They didn't live far away. I Looked through the window.My heart sank.In side was three giant lizards Eating A body.it looked like Ryan's Real Mother and father.My Head was spinning.I ran home.The front door was open.I looked through the window to see my parents Hiding Under the table while the monster was in the kitchen eating a whole chicken.I tried to get my mothers attention. Suddenly I felt  a hand grab my shoulder.They spun me around.It was my friend Leah. She lived Up the road. She looked Like she had been crying." My parents....These Lizards have got them,I escaped.." 

She dropped to the floor crying. I helped her up.I told her we had to fight them. We ran to the park and found some bottles. We smashed the ends of them and ran to my home.I Dived in and stabbed The lizard From the back. I ran out and ran to leah's house. ME and her dived on the lizard and stabbed it. I told her about Ryan's Parents. We ran to his aunties.We banged down the door and stabbed all the lizards. They were all dead.I took leah back to my house. We sat on the couch and took a deep breath. 

She whispered " I need to tell you something"  

"yes,what is it?"

Leah grabbed her chin and lifted up her skin...

Author's Note

sorry for any spelling

Reviews

[The XYZ Writer]

Wow, scary story! I don't do too good with those. But about the writing. After every period it would be good if you did a space. You do it in some areas and not in others. Also when doing dialoque, for every person talking go to a new line. Example: "Hello?" Jim said.
"Oh hi, I wasn't paying attention," Audrey said.
Something like that. Makes it easier to read. Also noticed you put capital letters in middle of sentences. Nothing you can't fix.
More too, but I won't annoy you with them. Sorry I am pretty harsh with judging and if you don't want me to, just say so. But the story was pretty good, although I'm gonna have trouble walking around the house at night now....
:) :) :D