The Next Day

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I Came To a school with no friends.

It was strange.

I wondered Down the hallways,Lost.

a boy, Didn't know who he was.

He Helped me find my class.

A new Friend.

the Next day I don't have enough for lunch.

a girl,I didn't  Know who she was.

She Gave Me the Extra Money.

A New Friend.

The Next Day,I play football against a wall.

A Boy, didn't Know who he was.

He liked football to,He played with me.

A new friend.

The Next Day.

A bully Pick on me.

A boy and girl,I didn't know who they were.

They stuck up for me.

New Friends.

Remember There are friendly people out there.Not all of them are mean.

Author's Note

Enjoy :)

Reviews

[Wren]

A nice poem:) just a few suggestions:
change the captials in each line so that only the first word has one, otherwise it is confusing
in line 3 make "Lost" a new one word line
in line 5 cut out 'He'
in line 13, make "he played with me..." a new line
in line 16 use "picked" not "pick"
in the last line, make "not all of them are mean..." a new line