Chapter 2_ The first day

      I was scared the enter the doors of Rutgers. My hands were trembling. Fearful, I walked in in with my eyes shut and went to my first class, marinebiology. I happen to find the ocean very interesting. I didn't even get to see my roommate because I rushed out of the room.

     When I entered the colorful classroom, I glared at the other students and went to find a seat. On my way over, a girl dropped her books all over the carpeted floor. I hurried and knelt to the floor to help her.

"Thank you so much." she smiled

I smiled back but I didn't say a word. She was very pretty. She sort of looked like me. When we stood up, we looked at eachother eye-to-eye for about five seconds. Afterwards, we sat down and class began. A grin came upon my face as I watched her sit in the seat next to me.

"I hope you don't mind I sit here." she said

"No, it's okay." I said with a small giggle

"I'm Stacy."

"I'm Jake, pleased to meet you."

"You as well" she smiled

 

Reviews

[Kathryn Star, Shine!]

I like how you introduce your character in the second chapter, although most times the first chapter is where you want to introduce yourself. The fact that you were faceless in the first chapter; most people could relate and see themselves in the same situation. Look forward to reading more. K