Lust Waka

This sweet suffering,

Agony and ecstasy,

My heart yearns for her.

Her emotions toy with me,

Does her heart soar for me too?

Reviews

[Richard🖌]

Hi, Uesugi!
What a beautiful and emotionally pleasing Sedoka Waka you have created of yearning and craving, and finally the question every unsure lover must surely wonder … all in perfect 5-7-5-7-7 metre.

Brilliant poeting, My New Friend … thank you sincerely for sharing your fine skills! ⁓ Richard

[Uesugi]

Thank you very much, I've only just started but hope to improve

[Richard🖌]

I would say you are already better than my best!