What You Say

What I wanted
       wasn't what she did
               and didn't require you
                        to wrap your arms
                         around me and tell me
                      that I'm beautiful
                  What I wanted was
             someone who could
        show me what it
  feels like to truly
love another
 human
   as my
        self

              Is
                it too
                    much to
                         ask if I could
                             hold your hand
                                 like in my dreams?
                                     Just for a second,
                                  long enough for me
                            to believe for one moment
                        that I can be your princess
                    I can be the one who will
               be by your side when
           nobody else wants
          to help you
            I will be
                whoever
                     you desire
                        or whatever
                            you dream of
                                If you desire me
                                    with a beautiful
      heart; mind
                                     I will do just so
                                    the sole goal
                                  of pleasing
                                  if that's
                                    what
   you
      say

Reviews

[Tasha]

Wow, I loved this, I also loved the shape you did a really good job. :)

[WordNerd]

VERY CREATIVE :D

[CharlesMonroe]

This is so beautiful (:

[CharlesMonroe]

This is so beautiful (:

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

Beautiful form it is - the poem even more so - baring yourself to the one you love.. very beautiful, Cloud.

Chloe

[Morrigan Nicole]

OMFG!!!! Wonderful!!! WOW!!! Just.... OMFG!!! Great Form!!!!

[Emunah June.]

Wow. I cant say anything but...woah.

[piggy]

whoa up a bit there girly

I like the shape etc and the writing is pretty cool too but hey, it sounds like a recipe for a door mat by way of content

[Alexis]

Oh my gosh, I loved this poem! I liked the format it was in! It caught my attention before I even started reading. This made me think of multiple different things... I suppose there could be multiple ways to interpret it. But anywho, this was great. Keep on writing!!