Gemini

I like the constellation Gemini. It inspired me.

As the morning freezes your hand
It soon drifts into a languid afternoon
The day becomes so slow and bland
Finally, from the depths, emerges Moon

Even if we are across the world apart
Our hearts remain in sync with this melody
Embrace the warm rhythm so it won't depart
We are the connected sides of Gemini

A broken-winged bird had followed me along
It rested its little tired head and I said to it,
"When your crying is over, lets sing a love song,
One that your worn heart will never forget."

Even if we are across the world apart
Our hearts remain in sync with this melody
Embrace the warm rhythm so it won't depart
We are the connected sides of Gemini

When you're alone, don't you ever cry
Just take my hand and we'll find the lost path
With our joined hands we could start to fly
Let there be love where there once was wrath

We are the connected sides of Gemini

Author's Note

TO CLARIFY: I don't know about others, but I pronounce Gemini *Jeh-mee-nee*.
Just to clear up the rhyming.

Reviews

[A.Lee]

"When you're alone, don't you ever cry
Just take my hand and we'll find the lost path
With our joined hands we could start to fly
Let there be love where there once was wrath

We are the connected sides of Gemini"

I loved that. Excellent write. I actually would have pronounced it with a "long i" sound at the end, but it didnt' sound off when I read it that way. Works however you pronounce it to me. It flowed very well. Nice work.

[Amy Bumpas]

Nice poem, and had a good flow and rhythm to it as well.

[Jonathan De Elvira]

I pronounce Gemine as *Jeh-mee-nee* too...:P...
But I guess almost anyone pronounced it that way...XD

now about the poem...
That's alot of words and things goin on for the sake of telling readers about Gemini..not to mention about the relation too...I wonder where did you get the idea...o.O...

nice writing...keep up...

[NXT Eoin]

I GIVE IT TWO THUMBS UP!!

[Miss Coral]

Love this.. I too pronoune it jeh-men-i, but it wasn't a huge deal for me to change it.
Beautiful piece.. great rhyming scheme and flow. :)
Glad to see you're writing.

-Coral-

[r]

this is beautiful! I pronounce it differently, "jeh-men-i", but that doesn't matter. This is a lovely poem, and I love the stanzas:

"Even if we are across the world apart
Our hearts remain in sync with this melody
Embrace the warm rhythm so it won't depart
We are the connected sides of Gemini"

It's beautiful and wonderful. :)

[Taylor H.]

this was beautiful

[Kira]

Jeh-mi-nye. I think that's how it's supposed to be pronounced, and I've never heard it pronounced differently.

I'm often inspired by stars. I liked this, but it isn't my favorite thing. It doesn't have this extra thing that makes it amazing.

[Atheana Kylee-S. C.]

nice poem :)

Lol cool tht gemini inspired you :)

[The Water Queen]

This poem was easy to follow and rhymed well. I love it. Great poem.