Gemini

Gemini

A Poem by Anonymous
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I like the constellation Gemini. It inspired me.

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As the morning freezes your hand
It soon drifts into a languid afternoon
The day becomes so slow and bland
Finally, from the depths, emerges Moon

Even if we are across the world apart
Our hearts remain in sync with this melody
Embrace the warm rhythm so it won't depart
We are the connected sides of Gemini

A broken-winged bird had followed me along
It rested its little tired head and I said to it,
"When your crying is over, lets sing a love song,
One that your worn heart will never forget."

Even if we are across the world apart
Our hearts remain in sync with this melody
Embrace the warm rhythm so it won't depart
We are the connected sides of Gemini

When you're alone, don't you ever cry
Just take my hand and we'll find the lost path
With our joined hands we could start to fly
Let there be love where there once was wrath

We are the connected sides of Gemini

© 2010 Anonymous


Author's Note

Anonymous
TO CLARIFY: I don't know about others, but I pronounce Gemini *Jeh-mee-nee*.
Just to clear up the rhyming.

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that was a beautiful write..and your authors note helped as I pronounce it with an i at the end...reread and it flows well :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


Aw this is a really good poem. I like it :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


I liked your poem a lot. It does connect with Gem IN Eye, and like Gem In Eye, it has a beautifully natural flow.

Smiling at you

Tai, a gem In Eye

Posted 14 Years Ago


Love it! :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


This was a really sweet poem. You poured your heart and soul
into this one.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Hello Cloud,

I do hope you figured out your situation with writing, just remember you have to do what you think you will enjoy doing with the rest of your life. This is a very pretty piece, I am not use to pretty as I am sure you know. It's an excellent write, and better read. Keep up the excellent work.

Regards,

Matthew

Posted 14 Years Ago


This poem is too much! And it's doing something different as well. It's not one of those lame ones.

Well, I like the themes portrayed in the poem such as depending on someone, and there not being someone better out there, and other ones that will take me ages to list them all. It's well planned out.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Beautiful poem! I love it! I this type of poem.. written for no particular reason, but inspired by something so beautiful you just have to write about it... great job!

Posted 14 Years Ago


It's lovely. Keep up the good work Cloud. it flowed quite nicely. don't worry about the rhyming, it sounds wonderful any way really.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Beautiful! nice write and quite uh...flowwy!

Posted 14 Years Ago



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