Desire

Seductive aura
Spiced
Furrowed auburn
Honey drips
From Moonlight's pale eye
Driven by ecstasy
Outcasted
By good nature
Sense
Calls out invectives
Yet deafened and blinded
By lust
Mute bird calls
Sing of passion
Lawless desire
Flames
Fanned by fervor
Intensely gnaws
Quivered in awe of elation
Fiery hunger
Quickens
Til the point of cries
Craving remains
Everlasting

Author's Note

This is not my usual. I'd like to expand my limits. Tell me your honest opinion.

Reviews

[TheKaylaPup]

I like it, but i don't love it. maybe thats just me, nothing strikes me as bad about it, it just doesn't strike me as exceptional.

[r]

I love this. it's interesting, and i love the imagery, and how you kept the sort of...mystery, i guess. I love this part:

"Furrowed auburn
Honey drips
From Moonlight's pale eye"

It's amazing. I LOVE this imagery!

:)

[Atheana Kylee-S. C.]

Intresting, poem...
It should be a little longer though :)

[little lily Bride of Ch..]

Hmm... Different Interesting above all this Poem was Passionate yet dark also Has some fire to it Nice work. i love these lines So beautiful and full of Fire These words and so much passion this Line came alive. Thanx for sharing My friend God bless Take care


I just love this line i keep on reading it so beautiful May give me a idea for a poem Cause i am pulled to thoes words must say again SO MUCH FIRE WoW i love it.

Furrowed auburn
Honey drips
From Moonlight's pale eye

[Eva]

at first i was confused about the pattern but then i found it! after that i coouldn't stop rereading it! it's my new favorite!

[NXT Eoin]

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[Ki]

Lol sorry about all of the spelling errors, my iPod is stupid

[Ki]

It's definately different from you other poems. but I like it a LOT! Very beautiful ad honest.