Desire

Seductive aura
Spiced
Furrowed auburn
Honey drips
From Moonlight's pale eye
Driven by ecstasy
Outcasted
By good nature
Sense
Calls out invectives
Yet deafened and blinded
By lust
Mute bird calls
Sing of passion
Lawless desire
Flames
Fanned by fervor
Intensely gnaws
Quivered in awe of elation
Fiery hunger
Quickens
Til the point of cries
Craving remains
Everlasting

Author's Note

This is not my usual. I'd like to expand my limits. Tell me your honest opinion.

Reviews

[Dr.Who.LOVER]

Its good like you said it's not something that you would write but you did a really good job. In my opinion it was soo good



-VampireChick

[kelly]

pretty. its really good

[Calypso]

So beautiful with great imagery.

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This was deep. And the flow was very nice. I liked it a lot. Thanks for sharing. :)

[Emunah June.]

Wow...it's way deep but at the same time can spawn into any direction...it's an incredible piece....really makes you think!

[Blossom]

this flows really nicely. it has strong imagery and its just beautiful

[Sofia N]

amazing, I just have to say i love the way you put this piece together, the words are just awesome :D

[JelliFyshKissUs]

If this is not your usual, don't ever go back. Sensually succulent. Bravo!

[Matthew Kult]

Good read. Flowed well. Good work

[Senseless whatever]

Good write. I like the overall use if strong imagery in this. When reading I found myself transformed to several different scenes or characters. Great job if that was your aim. Mindset determines the direction the imagery takes you.