Please

This is a rant. No rhyme, no rhythm... I just wanted to get it out.

Please
I know I might've not been helpful lately
Or your life maybe isn't going good
But when you say you're going out
To clear your mind of all the stress
When you feel better...
Please come back home
I promise I'll change
I promise I'll be there
Your life will be easier
Maybe if I wasn't making you angry?
Or sad? Stressed?
Will you at least call me when you leave?
Or tell me how you are?
I can change myself, really
I'll change to make you come home
I know I might've made you angry lately
Or your life is getting too hard on you
But when you say you're leaving
To clear your mind of everything
When you feel better...
Please come back home
Please

Author's Note

True story...

Reviews

[Eva]

i like how you put the words. and i see it as a beautiful rant.

[NXT Eoin]

*applaud*

[A.Lee]

Often, poems that are more of "rants" and "vents" are the best poems. Not only do they carry a lot of emotion and make good poetry, but they also help the writer as well. Good job. I hope everything is okay on your end.

[Senseless whatever]

Good rant. You covered the gamete here and that pushes your emotions through. Keep writing!

[Coyote Poetry]

Yes the offer of a open door is always good. In my lifetime people came back to me when they know you will be kind and have a place for then to feel safe. The poem have a bearing of sadness and hope also. A outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote

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A sorrowful lament..I believe that people should accept each other for who they are..obviously we want people to fit our ideals and wants, unfortunately that is not always the case..worse still if these are family..very emotional and poignant

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

Sad and I don't think you should change for someone else either. Be yourself and you'll be fine...people have to accept that...and I think this was good. Thank you for sharing. :()

[Kia-chan!]

This is very intruiging. Very good. I agree with Brandon. Don't change for anyone else, but yourself. Very good poem. Thanks for sharing :)