Breaking Point

Breaking Point

A Poem by Anonymous
"

A song. Imagine it like a Three Days Grace song.

"
(A)
Its become clear to me
The love I thought would be
Was a mistake

You drive me up the wall
I'd thought I'd seen it all
Till you came near

Its all a game to you
The way you beckon me
Its driving me insa-ane


(CHORUS)
My breaking point is boiling near
My blood's on fire when I hear your words
You lead me in then break me down
Submerged in your control I'm left to drown

You drive me insa-a-ane

Its not o-ver till I give myself away
You won't let go till I break my heart away
You have the key
I'm in the cell
But I'm so submerged you can't te-ll


(B)
I've now begun to cease
I know you won't release
Until I break

My world will fade away
When things don't go your way
What do you want?

Its all a game to you
The way you beckon me
Its driving me insa-ane


(CHORUS)


Its all a game to you
The way you destroy me
Its driving me to my-
Breaking Point



© 2010 Anonymous


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I imagined it more to the rhythm of "Its All Over" I don't think anybody could write music for this besides Three Days Grace. Especially cause of the way you used hyphens like insa-ane.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Very interesting lyrics. Definately a rock song.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Simple and cuts to the chase. I think it will be a cool song. I actually think it would make a good hard rock, industrial, metal...or punk song. It could fit into just about any genre. I find it easy to relate to as well.

Posted 14 Years Ago


This was the best songs that I read! it'll definitly make an awesome rock song! Great write! :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


AMAZING!!! I'm at a loss for words!

Posted 14 Years Ago


I've never heard much by Three Days Grace, but I really like the song! It would be cool to hear someone actually sing it.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Keevan's review pretty much sums up mine :) This is awesome and I can hear this as a Three Days Grace song!

Posted 14 Years Ago


I love it! I can seriously hear this as a Three Days Grace song! Time of Dying, with Break, and maybe Riot's in the rythem, too, but still. Awesome!

Posted 14 Years Ago



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