Breaking Point

Breaking Point

A Poem by Anonymous
"

A song. Imagine it like a Three Days Grace song.

"
(A)
Its become clear to me
The love I thought would be
Was a mistake

You drive me up the wall
I'd thought I'd seen it all
Till you came near

Its all a game to you
The way you beckon me
Its driving me insa-ane


(CHORUS)
My breaking point is boiling near
My blood's on fire when I hear your words
You lead me in then break me down
Submerged in your control I'm left to drown

You drive me insa-a-ane

Its not o-ver till I give myself away
You won't let go till I break my heart away
You have the key
I'm in the cell
But I'm so submerged you can't te-ll


(B)
I've now begun to cease
I know you won't release
Until I break

My world will fade away
When things don't go your way
What do you want?

Its all a game to you
The way you beckon me
Its driving me insa-ane


(CHORUS)


Its all a game to you
The way you destroy me
Its driving me to my-
Breaking Point



© 2010 Anonymous


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This is abosutly amazing. I'm glad I found your writings. I even sang this, it'd be a great Three Days Grace song.

By the way, your other writings, are magnificent. Your an excellent writer.

Posted 14 Years Ago


This was awesome. I can hear this as a song. I think it would become a hit for you. Thanks for sharing. :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


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that's super awesome.. i'd like to hear you sing it!

Posted 14 Years Ago


THis is fantastic!! I love it and I love 3 days grace :D

Posted 14 Years Ago


ive now begun to cease....is a very good line in a well balanced and (what i'd imagine with music) quirky write...with some admirable turns of phrase and i will visit your page again because you've just driven me insa-a-ane.....ha ha...good one Cloud...i like your name too because Final Fantasy Eight was one of my fave playstation ga-a-ames!!! ;)

Posted 14 Years Ago


awsome. can't think of a better word to describe it!

Posted 14 Years Ago


Loved it! :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


very good

Posted 14 Years Ago


very well written and great them and beat to this song love it nice work

Posted 14 Years Ago



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