Cello

I'm so into persona poems right now...

Wood
Against my chest
Strings
Line my fingertips
A bow
Gripped
Tightly
I run it
Smoothly
Across
Crisp
Silver
Strings
As new,
Fresh
Notes
Spill through nicely
Arranged, a colorful tied
Bouquet of emotion spills out
Flooding the room, echoing through
The entire house; my hands dancing across
The neck of a blessed creature, singing
Never has a human been able
To create such beauty
Without a thing such
As this beautiful beast
Music and sounds ebb from it's
Core, rumbling the earth's surface with
Nothing but it's music; nothing but it's song
To flow and twirl through human ears
Craving, oh how craving but to
Play the perfect melody;
Satisfied with
Itself

Reviews

[DeathByChoice]

Wow 8D Great job, absolutely loved it!

[NoAirToBreatheXSuffocat..]

love it, the way u made the words and everything!

[Blue]

Love the way you describe everything. It was written amazingly as a cello! I loved that! I know the feeling of just holding and playing your instrument you truly love! Thank you for sharing this piece.
J

[kelly]

thats really cool how you were able to make it into the shape of a cello. i would definitly fail if i tried that on my trumpet. good job :)

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I thought this was very nice.out I liked it. I play an instrument so I know how you feel about the cello. I play the trumpet though. I could never make a poem that looks like a trumpet because that would be a little to complicated. Thanks for sharing. :)

That was creative with the shape of the violin ;) Good job. The poem was great too.

[R E Tree]

I love music I listen to it everyday. I admire how musicians have creative beautiful talents. They perform so well and this poem describes every emotion of it.

[Andrew Schecker]

I play the violin, so this poem really got to me. I felt like I could really relate to what you were saying and the pleasure that comes from creating music with a stringed instrument.

[TheKaylaPup]

i love this. Your great at the shaped poems, I can never make the words are the shape line up right, yet you do so nicely. *jelsouly* keep it up!

[Ki]

you should be in to persona poems, my dear, you have such a talent for them, as i have read your others. i hope you know how talented you are.