Lost

I'm as lost as a penny
in a wishing well
If i will recover
I cannot tell
It has given me
a great start
To know
Im not whole
But part
I've found to
Live life
You must start
At a point
And then increase
Your radius
To allow more in
In this way
You can see
where you have been
All the grasping
of experiences of life
As of sounds
in your mind
And you're listening
For one thought
To bring silence
To your life
To make sense
Of all of this
But your life
Wont allow all of this
I pray in heaven
to find it bliss

Reviews

[Davidgeo]

Good write. On the "featured review...." Cilberto's an a*****e who parrots "how to write poetry" books.

He's not exactly wrong. But he's really just another d********g pretending community college is real talk. He's basically an "intellectual" commercial.

… a grain of salt. A really, really big grain of salt.

[Kent Rawski]

Appreciate your review of my work not others thank you

[Davidgeo]

Yeah, sorry about that.

[Laura Kate]

It seems to be true, that we search for our meaning all through out our lives to find that there is none. Only that our existence in itself is exactly what it's all about. In some ways, that can make us feel merely a part, and in other ways it allows us to feel a sense of wholeness. I really enjoyed your poem Kent, it gave me much to think about and from different perspectives too.

[NotUsinganymore]

Very beautiful poem about being lost. Sometimes it is good to be lost so you can find yourself again. c:

[Relic]

I'm sure heaven has all the quiet and reflective time anyone will ever want or need. I'm looking forward to some of that myself.

[Lea Sheryn]

We all get lost and struggle to find ourselves. This is an excellent expression of that reality.

[Laconic Meraki]

This is my life right now.
Feeling not lost ,but not found...
Isolated from energies for other people's drain me down.
Like a broken clock stuck in time.
Myself, with patience , I seek and I shall eventually find.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

a narrow road is no way to make sense of life....i think we have to expand the number of lanes both coming and going...our opinions and those opposite the yellow lines...and hopefully we can blur those lines together....and be content with others who don't feel the same about things as we do.
bliss is in understanding and showing understanding to others.
j.

[Kent Rawski]

thank you Jacob I had a midnight interlude

[Kent Rawski]

I didn't want to publish this too open for criticism

[Laconic Meraki]

Stop caring what other people think! You are who you are. Find it. And embrace it.