what matters

what matters

A Poem by Kent Rawski
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existence

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living is surviving
but loving
is keeping
your heart alive

© 2019 Kent Rawski


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I love the brevity here
Did we somehow disconnect from what matters while surviving ?
Is that heart still alive ?

Love your work !

Posted 4 Years Ago


Ahhh, I agree with your message, and I envy your ability to say it so succinctly.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Kent Rawski

5 Years Ago

Ty i uh like to keep things short say little hopefully mean a lot
I do believe we don't do enough living. Lovely sentiments.

Posted 5 Years Ago


I like that analogy.
Elle

Posted 5 Years Ago


Kent Rawski

5 Years Ago

thank you. You have a fine unicorn steed
Succinct truth here Kent. Survival leaves little time for art or perhaps love. Without love we have very little. Perhaps it is what keeps us human. Having said that there are some incredible stories of love in the depths of despair.
Food for thought here.
Alan

Posted 5 Years Ago


Kent Rawski

5 Years Ago

Thank you alan for your insightful comments especially the human part
Loving is keeping your heart alive! I like that line!!!

Posted 5 Years Ago


Kent Rawski

5 Years Ago

Thank you for reading
Yes, very true, stright to the point...:)
Loving is living also in some ways. Because your heart should be alive.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Kent Rawski

5 Years Ago

Well said thank you for your review
Amen to that. Without heart, we are the Borg. (Only fleshy)

Posted 5 Years Ago


Kent Rawski

5 Years Ago

Ty Samuel appreciate your stop by excuse me for being silly how in the Dickens did you get your name.. read more
Samuel Dickens

5 Years Ago

A fellow by the name of Joseph Dickens came to America in the 1600's, then had children and passed t.. read more
Kent Rawski

5 Years Ago

That would be cool but you have a heart for writing
i like this, wonderful insightful words

Posted 5 Years Ago


Insightful thought . . . without love life is just surviving!
Tom

Posted 5 Years Ago



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Kent Rawski

Baldwin, FL



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