Love

Love

A Poem by Kent Rawski
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Sudden fall

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Love is the moment
my heart meets yours
time stands still
the sun bursts
and it feels
like my first
day on earth

© 2019 Kent Rawski


Author's Note

Kent Rawski
Just a little diddy

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This I really love. It`s simple as nothing more needs to be said...the sun bursts... :)
Yes, it`s first day when you dont think about the end day too

Posted 5 Years Ago


Love, timeless. Loved the imagery of the sun bursting

Posted 5 Years Ago


Kent Rawski

5 Years Ago

Hmmm you chose the line most did not thank you for reading
Wow! Just wow Kent. You capture in a short verse the essence that most of us seek in any loving relationship. First day on earth sounds so profoundly loving!

Posted 5 Years Ago


Kent Rawski

5 Years Ago

thanks a lot john adam an eveesque?
John Alexander McFadyen

5 Years Ago

Indeed so but my always seeking true love mentality loved first day on earth as truely falling in lo.. read more
Kent Rawski

5 Years Ago

😉 Thank you
Brevity which speaks volumes and in a most amazing way. Love this poem.

Chris


Posted 5 Years Ago


Kent Rawski

5 Years Ago

thanks Christine guess why love fills up volumes its a treasure
Chris Shaw

5 Years Ago

Love is the best treasure:)
what an amazing expression of love... imagining the speaker looking forward to the second day on earth.
j.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Kent Rawski

5 Years Ago

Lol thank you jacob
It may be a short piece but it's a beautiful one! I loved it. Well done! :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


Kent Rawski

5 Years Ago

Thank you Adam for reading sharing and being on this site I haven't been here long but prepare to be.. read more
True! You say so much in a very small amount of words.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Kent Rawski

5 Years Ago

Ty lea for reading and your kind words
Lea Sheryn

5 Years Ago

You're welcome, Kent.
Short and sweet and beautiful !

Posted 5 Years Ago


Kent Rawski

5 Years Ago

thank you I reviewed yours sure hope more to come
Wow! :)
This is a lovely little diddy!

Posted 5 Years Ago


Kent Rawski

5 Years Ago

Thank you for reading hope it uplift you
Edie Blue Starfish

5 Years Ago

You're welcome. :)
I do love this.
And
it's true people spend so much effort trying to force that magical blending. But when its the real deal we come to that other person with no baggage just our hearts

Posted 5 Years Ago


Kent Rawski

5 Years Ago

Just keep it short and sweet😉 thanks for reading and enjoying

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Added on June 4, 2019
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Kent Rawski
Kent Rawski

Baldwin, FL



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