love shone (shown)

love shone (shown)

A Poem by Kent Rawski
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a romantic description of a woman's face radiating love

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the moon is a mere backdrop, to the face I gaze upon, your softly spoken beauty, shimmers glowingly, I pray a reflection of my own, my eyes take in your radiance, there can no words tell, what my eyes take in, maketh my heart to swell, in this soft loving moment I am more than blessed, for what man knows that looking into the face of love, his heart has been caressed, this soft sweet tender moment has long been spent, yet til this day I longingly yearn for a lovelight heaven sent 

© 2019 Kent Rawski


Author's Note

Kent Rawski
i haven't learned to publish my lines correctly yet forgive me :(

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'love shone (shown)
Kent Rawski,
This shares the feeling of a open faced caring and a unhindered nurture for the moon is the open reflection of life giving sunlight. The whole poem gives this same feeling, a desire to see honestly reflected caring given openly and not hidden. Beautiful and inspiring. Oh how I do love the night and it's own rare unique grace!
Blessings,
Kathy

Posted 4 Years Ago


Very beautiful, and emotional, and deep. I like the way you build the poem, it sounds like inner awareness..
shimmers glowingly" is very lovely.


Posted 5 Years Ago


Kent Rawski

5 Years Ago

My my the nuances that can be perceived by the emotions connected to our mind thank you kindly
Without the lines breaks this reads as a very romantic piece of prose. Your words capture the radiance of love beautifully.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Kent Rawski

5 Years Ago

Ty Edie life has its glorious moments
This is lovely, I love how you bring in a psychology of reflection which some research shows humans need in order to feel whole. Also I like that this light is given by the feminine moon and not the masculine sun. I have a lovely image of a man with a full heart looking longingly up to the night sky, safe under his love's shine.

Posted 5 Years Ago


This is beautifully stated.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Kent Rawski

5 Years Ago

thank you It doesn't happen everyday
Lea Sheryn

5 Years Ago

You're welcome.
Excellent opening you go big, with the moon then reel us in, declaring its greatness a backdrop to Love.
Your words are smooth, lovely and your closing line a model for romance.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Kent Rawski

5 Years Ago

thank you Cherrie I think you are fond of opening lines the writer in you
Cherrie

5 Years Ago

I am, it sets the mood and beckons the reader.
What a beautiful poem. Full of romance. He is mesmerised indeed. No mistake about it.

Chris

Posted 5 Years Ago


Kent Rawski

5 Years Ago

thank you chris this is from an experience

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Added on April 21, 2019
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Kent Rawski
Kent Rawski

Baldwin, FL



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