purest of reasons

self inward process I guess it shows to write a poem in minutes doesn't do justice

here's something I've thought of a bit,where exactly do thoughts become feelings and where do they fit, or am I off course that one or the other is ever meant, to become emotions that are sentient, and where does spontaneity jump in this hunt,with all its circumstance it can be quite blunt,so left to wonder how this can become that,i never quite know just where im at,perhaps just a juxtapose I suppose, so one day all may become clear when all is torn away , the hubris the debris that clouds my way, and the path that was uncertain will not let me stray,yet lifes little vagaries will always stay 

Reviews

[Kathy Van Kurin]

'Purest of reasons'
Kent Rawski,
Great string of thoughts in rhythm. Yes life thoughts and feelings may just be enjoyed and accepted for what they are... sometimes. I like to think too and find the joy and interest in how the mind works in myself and others. Hopefully not too much mulling over what I have no power to change.
Blessings,
Kathy

[Reilly]

i guess the purest of reason is that there is no reason at all for these feeling and thoughts we have, they just are. very much enjoyed this.

[Cherrie]

I was thinking about your opening line to this
...here's something I've thought of a bit,where exactly do thoughts become feelings ...

After my mother died my stepdad kept her cell phone. After about six months I decided to change the address book in my phone to say Bill(instead of Mom).
I thought about, did it, then when I said it outloud to tell my husband immediately my eyes filled with tears, I was flooded with emotion, and I changed it back.
Mind-emotions - the spoken word a powerful combo.

[Kent Rawski]

So powerful so true

[Edie Blue Starfish]

So much to ponder here. Perhaps it's best to just appreciate that things are as they are.

[Kent Rawski]

I like this advice though I have a knack for pondering

[Edie Blue Starfish]

Me too. :)

[Neville]

Many of the worlds greatest philosophers, thinkers and poets have considered the very same thing and throughout history.... am not sure despite their individual and collective theories and conclusions that we are any nearer the knowing.... interesting..... Neville

[Kent Rawski]

true Neville the mind is a wonder; in the more modern era parts of the brain are mapped out and correlations have been made as to what this part performs in that case anyway we have more knowledge than Shakespeare had in 1615

[Neville]

He could sure write though, couldn't he..

[John Alexander McFadyen]

I guess we all puzzle at somew time about how and why we feel and think and act. As humans we are programmed to ask questions of ourselves and our surroundings. All part of the self preservation shield. You capture that question in this conversational rhyming piece.

[Kent Rawski]

Thank you for reading john exactly meant more for the question than the answer

[AYVID N]

You seem to have a penchant for runaway thoughts...I wonder why that is Lol. Write away sis...maybe someone will come along to decipher the indecipherable! 💕

[Faith]

I wonder sometimes if feelings are a commitment or a flight of fancy, depending on the person and circumstance. The combination of mood, moment, and state of mind all play into feelings, relationships, and the energy one is willing to commit in the short or long term. Some are not wired for long-term relationships. It’s okay if they recognize it, but if not, it is torment for those they encounter.

[Kent Rawski]

Thank you for reading and sharing interesting thoughts though for all of us it seems the answers are elusive but I very much liked your inward process😉

[Cherrie]

That synopsis of yours is what makes poetry so great.
Our conception of a poem is scribbled down capturing an element of ourselve on paper.

Then we give way to the viewer to reflect.

The readers past, present state of mind, and emotional state gives the poet's canvas endless possibilities.
Possibilities we never dreamed of. The great thing about being here in the cafe is we get to hear some of those impressions.

Whether it's better to weigh and measure a piece, or whip it up from scratch? I guess that depends on which way the wind blows. :)

[Kent Rawski]

thanks for being there to share very good input

[Kent Rawski]

P.s. as I get more reviews and hear other views your words come ringing true very astute of you😛