SubmisS[ive]SymBiossiS (pARTt two- aaa)

SubmisS[ive]SymBiossiS (pARTt two- aaa)

A Poem by eli mercuree rue

Maybe it[s] because t.he.y were
Loo[king] to hard
Because she is always there
Su..b..tle and at times not moving
Just waiting [watching PPprophecies]
WaAAaiting for everything to come to her
Which may be tTThe wrong see[ccc]choice[seahorse]hoice
HeRRre….in Boy[cott]land
Here where green means red [IIintenional lies]
AAand purple means forget me not [repent]
WheRRre some sticksss
Feel the need [to make Ccchoices for the m.a*s.sses]
To protrude
Like an oversized cannibals
Liver oatmeal tree
Hhhuge.liver and drip[pee]ing.oatmeal
In an orange bowl
On top of a green ski[eYYye]
F*****g the world
Like mini golf carts
Screwing little holes
Containment by all means of the word
Containment in a square container
Straight lines and sharp edges

 

 

© 2008 eli mercuree rue


Author's Note

eli mercuree rue
damn i love me

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looking TOO hard

Posted 17 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

it is what it is

how do you fee about seahorse
no you know what we'll talk about this tomorrow

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

but i like i pee to make choices for the masses...
it's funntier

Posted 17 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

patriarchy is

F*****g the world
Like mini golf carts
Screwing little holes
Containment by all means of the word
Containment in a square container
Straight lines and sharp edges

Posted 17 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

i pee to make choices for the masses...

Posted 17 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

IIintenional and sutle??
clarify....please...

boyland...boycott..love this..
sticks protrude cannibals... i see this...
i want more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Posted 17 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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eli mercuree rue
eli mercuree rue

Durham, NC



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