Truth.Be.Told

I.won.der.how.she
Feels.ly.ing.to.me.eve.ry
Day.know.ing.she.cares

Reviews

[Carmen]

hmmm.... funny. i've been on this haiku thing today. see, i hate haikus. but there's this thing on the forum (some kid trying to write haikus - was a bit amusing) so they've been on my mind. then i was reading about them - then posted some more crap in the forum about haikus... so this is kind of a perfect day ender haiku. like how you separated the syllables.... the message was powerful although i read today they are supposed to be about seasons and weather and s**t... but really - who cares? if i were to try and interpret i'd say either a lover or a friend cheated or is hiding something big and the narrator knows... i dunno. :) anyway i hate haikus.

[Amanda Crandall]

ah! what is she lying about!

intrigue! suspense!

I like your style girl.