FAWA

FAWA

A Poem by eli mercuree rue

Forget me Not

And that memory
Will never Fade
Away

© 2008 eli mercuree rue


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eli mercuree rue
dammit

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And will fade away...
it will in tiem...not gone, but fade...
but you wont ever forget...
that's what i see when i read.
very succinct

my initial instinct was to suggest this become an acrostic...fadeaway... but againt the words are so terse it's perfect like this....

Posted 17 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

as long as one has breath one will never forget memories of people, places and events. They can be good things or Bad things. I thank you deeply for sharing your meaning / thoughts behind this poem it really changes how i see it. Knowing what you told me - this poem really has a huge impact and is a very powerful piece.

Posted 17 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Added on April 7, 2008

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eli mercuree rue
eli mercuree rue

Durham, NC



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