Le[s]Be[A]n Acquaintance

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                        She is an acquisitively acquiescent acquaintance
                        Actively accepting actualized advertent advances
                        Feverishly fading formidable factions
                        Existing fully without conformity
                        Resigning restrictive retractions

Reviews

[...Where Nothing Is Sac..]

"Existing fully without conformity"
is this maybe the most significant line without me fully realising it (because not alliterated)?

Looks like you probably had fun writing it
like a word game
or something

It's interesting and a good read.
Extensive vocab
you have there.

Great.

[Racheal]

This is a good piece and i like the way you are pretty in tune with the idea of how those of an alternative lifestyle live their life.

[Carmen]

hmmm... the apple tempting the eye? if so, then maybe you better not and you'll be safer that way. good po-em. enjoyed it quite myself.

[lostintheworld]

i get it
except for the third line...
damn i suck

ashley
safer
really? safer, i mean? are you?

you're killing me with the alliteration...i think i just came... i'm such an alliteration w***e.
ha

nice work