Confession #1

In all its irresistible [yet] subtle indignity
One day the world will glorify her
With the utmost respect as she [seemingly]
Nonchalantly restores independence
Across the chest of the
Virally dependent masses
Awakens the sleeping vigilantes who have become
Grounded by the unchanging
Intuitions of [his] conceptualizing capabilities
Not lacking, will she be, the
Almighty, liberating, mentality

 

 

Author's Note

fuck yeaaaaaaaaaaa

Reviews

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

I love it and i get it on my level.. probbaly not what you were writing about but i see a meaning..

Chloe

[Melissa M.]

I am fairly positive that I didn't actually "get" this piece. But that's cool, I like it anyway. It flows well, which even some of the most mundane sometimes cannot accomplish.

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

Hey!

This is mind boggling at first, so on second read, it is still mind boggleing and I got it!
Love it, flows well and would be good spoken aloud to me.

Peace

[lostintheworld]

taht fukcing squirel is awesome

[{Angel Redd}[Formerly A..]

I really like it...my eyes didn't adjust at first, so it took me a while to read the message, but it's very good.

[lostintheworld]

me too! lol
Good flow- love the language- and the message.

"the unchanging intuitions of his conceptualizing capabilities"
"liberating"

IMO- leave all the words except {its} in the second line... I like the his/her parts of this.