Wanted.

Wanted.

A Poem by eli mercuree rue

 

Tit tat

Tatt er ing

Empty sound waves

Pounding against

This E a r

 

This

Is

Tillage

Rubbing

Against

Wire.

 

Placed.perched.peering

 

For all

To hold

On

To [clench].

 

Better off Naked.

 

What is it

To mean

If meaning

Is meaningless

 

{As translation proves}

© 2010 eli mercuree rue


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I liked how used the words. Made them come alive and made the reader think.
"What is it
To mean
If meaning
Is meaningless"
I could write a epic poem from your lines above. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


this is great creative poetry, I love it

Posted 14 Years Ago


This has such an interesting structure. It really emphasizes the tone of this piece. It's as if you are struggling to speak, or you're at a loss of words. I enjoy your creativity.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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eli mercuree rue
eli mercuree rue

Durham, NC



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