Inoculate

Inoculate

A Poem by eli mercuree rue

She drove on awkwardly insatiable

Twists and turns where

The stinging burns were occurring

On seams of her medial corpus

 

Neither initial nor final she sold

Her soul on a beige piece of paper

 

It was there with her wit

In the midst of his fit that she thought

To herself,

“If I turn the wheel it will all be over”

 

© 2008 eli mercuree rue


Author's Note

eli mercuree rue
a choice we all must ponder someday

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Nice internal rhyming

thanks for teaching me
'medial corpus'

"stinging burns"
= painful thoughts?

"beige piece of paper"
= marriage certificate?

you say a lot
in so brief a piece

although melancholy,
it's kind of catchy
i guess because
of the rhythm
and flow

this kind of thing
is why i don't drive


i like it too
hope that's ok

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You know how sometimes when it's right in front of your face you cant see it?

So, I sold my soul once, and I'm still paying the price. And perhaps since this very thought ofturning the wheel has occurred on tooooooo many occasions- i just cant review this properly.

but i like it. so there.

Posted 17 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

hmmmmm

yes what a thought.

pondering this in my slumber...

Posted 17 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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eli mercuree rue
eli mercuree rue

Durham, NC



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