Die x o

Die x o

A Poem by eli mercuree rue

iMage [iN]
Living warrr[iN.a]ruled
where sell.ads
were gest.a*s
fattening as the
beef.t**d
and fry but three
TiMEs as grow.sa
but still
wreck.her.men.did

How fast would you submit..?

© 2008 eli mercuree rue


Author's Note

eli mercuree rue
yeah, don't you just hate the forced diet and the med. conditions that come with it?

for fucks sake could we get a little light down here

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well, I'd have an even better excuse to starve myself...haha. you know that'd be more funny if i didn't actually starve myself. but i digress

dude salads are kinda dangerous these days when you consider all the s**t that is put on them to make the veggies grow yo
It's like oryx and crake and s**t

if you consider the fast food industry
it is all recommeneded really...hmmm
commercials, movies
etc...

i especially loved your play on world. spectacular


Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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well, I'd have an even better excuse to starve myself...haha. you know that'd be more funny if i didn't actually starve myself. but i digress

dude salads are kinda dangerous these days when you consider all the s**t that is put on them to make the veggies grow yo
It's like oryx and crake and s**t

if you consider the fast food industry
it is all recommeneded really...hmmm
commercials, movies
etc...

i especially loved your play on world. spectacular


Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wreck
her mend did

that great!!

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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