Ello Ello

Ello Ello

A Poem by eli mercuree rue

imoved around
the [free.me]
frowning

wondering how
deep can deep be
if the depth was never
dictated
by way of
extremist's policies
to a
desolate
empty mind
mine or the oblique

showing pride
with the responses
to the trash

flaunting itself

on my fingertips
"Hey look at me i'm a
philosophical thinker
opening up my
cardiac spinchter so
for iCan let
mah food
digest as i
ingest another one
of your thoughts
call it deep
while im thinkin' its cheap
and takin notes
cause i like yo flow"
read it with a silly
voice
and itll make more sense

'cause all i'm really trying to say

is

 

I don't want you to be me

I want you to be you and get off

of my nuts because they need

space to mother f**k and breathe

 

ha

I'm just kidding

you can attempt

I find it flattering

 

© 2008 eli mercuree rue


Author's Note

eli mercuree rue
for my admirers hahhaa

jk

i love you guys

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ha. i read it in a silly voice.
and my mom officially thinks im on crack.

THANKS.

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i read it with a silly voice
it still sounded all deep and philisophical and s**t

cheap eh? cheap like the hooker who couldnt afford three condoms?
or cheap like pisspoor imiatation of your work?

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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eli mercuree rue
eli mercuree rue

Durham, NC



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