Jumping Trees the Proximal Pursuit of Happyness: 051113

Jumping Trees the Proximal Pursuit of Happyness: 051113

A Poem by eli mercuree rue
"

got a birthday coming up these are my thoughts on that

"

If 22 is the year of yes

Then 23 must be the year of God-bless

Blessings manifesting

Quivering from the inside out of me

Reflective communication

Words selective

Egotistical impulses sedated

Body wrapped in hallucinations

The grand visions of elation

And paradise lies

Like a pair of dice

Rolling from my fingers to

The floor

Eyes watching eyes like

God watching God

Breath pushing breath

As body and mind

Follow the soul for

Revelation

Yearning more than survival

Desiring life

By the grace of I

Find mySelf

Opening mouth to the rhythm of Ra(h)

© 2013 eli mercuree rue


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Is this...gratitude? From the pen of LE? Whoa.
And wow. And rhyming. (and parentheses!) (more parentheses, please!)

"And paradise lies
Like a pair of dice
Rolling from my fingers to
The floor
Eyes watching eyes like
God watching God" - f**k yeah.

I'm glad to hear you're looking to live not just survive, kiddo. You deserve this.
Oh, and happy belated birthday.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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All I can say is wow. The language of this is fantastic.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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eli mercuree rue
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