OVERWHELMED

AN OLD POEM

OVERWHELMED     2-12-04

Eager to always please her.

Suspicious for unloved.

Jealousy is my name.

Cause of all my game.

 

Uncomfortable with self-pity.

Can`t wait to suck her tity.

 

What does she want out of my life.

I already have a wife.

 

Ashamed of what i created.

I have to stop.

Well time to be graveful.

cause it`s hard to be faithful.

 

 

Author's Note

AN OLD POEM 2-12-04

Reviews

[universalove]

thank u 4 the reveiw. and the help in my spelling. i know its a little bad but what can i say . thank u again

[Laura E. Aranda]

A couple of misspellings
T***y
and faithful

haha
you may want to fix those! haha

Cheers, lea

[universalove]

thank you for the review. it is always nice to know somebody like a few of my poems.

[closed account]

OH,,, such a telling poem, thanks for sharing...

[universalove]

thank you

[The Poor Man's Poet]

If that pic you choose is any indication of who this poem about.
Staying faithful isn't the only thing she would find hard. (smile)