Don't believe what they say!

Don't believe what they say!

A Story by Ty96

He had to get himself together before he could get with her.
he claims he's getting better.
Not trying to move fast but its hard when your mind can't keep up with your heart.
Heart beating fast like its trying to get out.
They say don't believe everything you hear
As my mind screams i should go for it
hoping that one day we can move forward
They say don't believe everything you hear,
My head against his chest i can hear his heart beating 
like moment when...
Just living in the moment
But don't believe everything you hear
like that moment he tells you he wants to takes it slow
because lord knows he's been waiting on a blessing like me
i think i like you.
no i know i do because my mind tells me so
But they say,don't believe everything you hear.
But wait..
let me talk about myself for a minute
it's all i have
Never climb without knowing the rock.
in caution lies the things you've always wanted.
To believe you're always wanted
....
what a shame!
But anyway..
Don't believe me when i say i want you close to me,
don't believe me when i tell you you're dope
And don't believe me when i say we can bring our guards down emotionally
and when i say us being together is how it's supposed to be
because they say don't believe everything you hear
but if you do have faith to believe then we share the same fear.
but we don't need to be scared because they said
don't believe everything you hear
So...
why should we believe anything they say
why don't we just trust each other
Because i'm feeling you.

© 2016 Ty96


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The author exhibits an outstanding mastery of language, skillfully merging narrative techniques with deep thematic exploration. The integration of symbolism and imagery not only enriches the story but also encourages readers to explore its underlying meanings. The pacing is finely tuned, creating a narrative that builds tension effectively, while the character development remains complex and convincing.

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Added on April 28, 2016
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Ty96
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