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This is one of two poems I wrote together in 2004. It is the first time it's been 'published' for a viewing audience. I welcome any and all comments. Thank you.
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in this hustle bustle all i want is silence and just calmness but with other things u have to go with the flow harming yourself with it.very nice poem thanks for sharing it.
Posted 6 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
6 Years Ago
Thank you Ellie. I agree -- it's not easy to stop to value the silence needed to fill one with calmn.. read moreThank you Ellie. I agree -- it's not easy to stop to value the silence needed to fill one with calmness. I appreciate your review :-)
What joy you must have had writing this. A moment of peaceful reflection is rare in such a world full of noise
Posted 6 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
6 Years Ago
Thanks KC. Peaceful reflection is exactly what inspired me; the joy simply poured forth. I'm so plea.. read moreThanks KC. Peaceful reflection is exactly what inspired me; the joy simply poured forth. I'm so pleased it read that way to you.
Beautifully written. The comfort and serenity of a fond & cherished memory.
Posted 6 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
6 Years Ago
Thank you, Taino, for your spot-on review. Yes -- 'comfort and serenity' are, indeed, what I felt wh.. read moreThank you, Taino, for your spot-on review. Yes -- 'comfort and serenity' are, indeed, what I felt when composing this. I'm happy it came across as I'd hoped it would. Kind regards and Happy New Year :-)
Gentle, kind and powerful use of words. I liked the flow of thoughts leading to true and needed ending.
"Be still my soul
Quiet me"
I say the above lines often in my day. Thank you Dianne for sharing your amazing poetry.
Coyote
Posted 7 Years Ago
6 Years Ago
Please forgive my extreme delay in responding to your kind review. The flow was easy for me as it re.. read morePlease forgive my extreme delay in responding to your kind review. The flow was easy for me as it reflects how natural it all felt to compose. Thanks so much again.
The melancholy of your words are palpable, and beautifully expressed. Nice to meet you, Dianne!
Posted 7 Years Ago
7 Years Ago
Ooh, I love the word 'melancholy'. It beautifully describes my feelings all those years ago when I w.. read moreOoh, I love the word 'melancholy'. It beautifully describes my feelings all those years ago when I wrote this. Thank you, Kelly -- it's nice to meet you too!
6 Years Ago
Hope you are enjoying the snow. Happy New Year, Dianne!
Why have you kept this hidden away for 13 years. Beautiful words
Posted 7 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
7 Years Ago
Your comment is lovely. You ask a great question too that directly speaks to my finally putting my w.. read moreYour comment is lovely. You ask a great question too that directly speaks to my finally putting my writing out there -- as in -- "un-hiding" myself. Thank you again :)
My new life chapter now can be suggested in the literal sense. After years of procrastination, it has come down to this: Why have I blocked myself? I have enjoyed writing for many years and for a myri.. more..