Sea War

A thousand different pairs of eyes,

All watching the same treasured prize.

Swords raised, ready to compete!

Like the largest battle fleet!

Some sank instantly, some stood afloot.

Some are stratagist, some are cut throats!

Some spilled blood, some saved lives,

Yet have no doubt, all keep to strive!

The winner will have a victor's glory!

His self immortolized in a legendary story.

However, the battle will still wage on!

For new ships will come when others are gone!!

Reviews

[Michael X]

This poem defines conquer and glory on a seaside setting, the battle leaves
a fresh impression, powerul and memorable, this is excellent reading.

[Tate Morgan]

I like it it tells a story it rhymes it is a story as old as humanity we are just unredeemable i guess thanks for review ing my work I am in south carolina i take on more than i can handle

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

classic tale of of undulating tides of conflict~ love the old skool rhyming schematics that enrich the poetic with the old world flavors of language~