Terger

A new write, I like this =).

Devours, what change to Impossible.

Hours, the change to Impossible.

Rhyme my change and cling I.

Time of tick, the reversing.

Lingers Regret.

Dies Sadness. Calms Anger.

Day my shadows, regret of wraith.

Play and pull, strings of thousands.

Clouds dead blinding, behind hide I.

Doubt and accusation, betrayal of fear.

Time fleeing, younger growing.

Nature, its against spins, clock.

See mind's, a in floating and bottled.

Voice my finding for you, Thank.

Glass fogged under, hidden.

Words true, my are these.

Author's Note

I'm leaving this up to you :D. Please review with your thoughts.

Also, most grammatical errors are on purpose, please read closely.

Reviews

[Tate Morgan]

It felt like a thought I would have upon waking up jumbled yet related sort of the way we remember things

[Michael X]

wow, the absolute experiment is a success, unique and crafty, i found myself hooked word to word, leaves a ponder to beg, awsome job here Ryan :)

[Devons]

This is rather experimental, but rather good and rather effective. The concept becomes clearer as you read, and gradually the purpose of the reverse perspective it employs becomes subtly comprehensible. The employment of this technique is quite revealing, and almost creates its own language - but it shows very cleverly how the language can give the same impression with the choice of words as it does when spoken in direct order.
But this had to be well thought out in order to make it work, and when one reads it back over (ironically, in correct order) the real power of the words is compounded, and brings a dramatic value to the writing.
Really well done.