Draw your sword.

Draw your sword.

A Poem by Ryan Falzon - Tymon
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Poem on about how violence is not/never the answer

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Draw your sword.
Take your stance.
Only one chance.
Strike them down!
The enemy comes from all four sides.
My only hope, my blade on my hand.
Bodies drop, blood like sand.
I shall survive,Only I shall stand! 
Draw your sword.
Face your fears.
Hide the tears.
Launch with fury!
They run back,My time to attack.
I explode in the addictive red dance,
Leaving time for just a small glance.
They stop, and turn to escape.

Draw your sword.
Master the technique.
Don't let 'em sneak.
And kill them all!
Revenge is mine, Blood shall shine.
As the only wolf, I hunt the prey.
An arrow strikes, into my heart.
I need to go back to the start!

Drop your sword.
Regret this day.
You shall pay.
When sworn through swords!


© 2010 Ryan Falzon - Tymon


Author's Note

Ryan Falzon - Tymon
Inspired by "Sword through swords" music from dmc4. Gave me the idea of using swordplay as a metaphor.

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This was a good poem. I love swords. I might buy one when I'm older. It will hang on my wall. Thanks for sharing. :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


fantastic word play ~ sword play~ as a a girl who own a sweet Bushido I can relate~ I also like the subtle undertone as related to how one may approach life as a battle inserted expertly right beneath the surface of the poem just waiting to be discovered~ much enjoyed~

Posted 14 Years Ago


Draw your sword.
Master the technique.
Don't let 'em sneak.
And kill them all!
Loved this quote mate and thought this is one of your best poems yet keep it up pal! rating a sweet 100 and totally sending friends to read this!
btw released a new poem or two if u want to see.

Posted 14 Years Ago


"Draw your sword.
Face your fears.
Hide the tears.
Launch with fury!"

Love those lines.
Nicely done. I love this! =D


Posted 14 Years Ago



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