How adorable in its innocence. It has the voice of a child happily saying goodbye to a beloved mascot, knowing that there'd be a next time. It is a relaxing poem.
A really touching tribute to an often-harsh season. It's almost like a personification of winter; and like talking kindly of a powerful friend whom you love as well as fear. Neat and strong, using unwasted words.
I hate winter so this helped me understand why some people love it. I really like the clothed prison and the shelter of ice. Very good descriptions. Good write!
You wish to know more about me?
You want to see what I see?
Then listen to the words I write.
With them I will give you my sight.
I'm a thinker in my time.
Making everything rhyme.
Wondering w.. more..