A Peaceful Place

i randomly wrote this

As I stare at the moon.
I listen to the wave beat against the rock
The wind going threw the tree.
I find myself sitting in a peaceful place.
A peaceful world.
As I drift of into my sleep
I think of how this world would be without war.
Without violance.
Without evil.
As I dream
I dream about this world of what it could be.
This world I wish to be.
As I wake up.
I wish it was night again.
So i could stare at the moon.
And be peaceful once again.

Author's Note

do you like it?

Reviews

[Encore]

Really good! I can pick up on your relaxed tone.
Kudos to you, sir!

[Aimee]

Whoa.
I really like this poem.

It makes me feel happy...but then sad. :/
The earth really should be a peaceful place, but no.

Overall, I think it's a fantastic poem. [: