Thoughts of you.

 

 

 

 

 

I thought I had it all figured out,

thought I knew love like the back of my hand.

Then thoughts of you began to sprout,

and new feelings began to make a stand.

Now I see you in a whole new light,

and I'd do anything to be with you.

These things I'm feeling, I just can't fight,

I've fallen for you and theres nothing I can do.

 

Author's Note

I hope you enjoy it, please feel free to show constructive criticism.

Reviews

[~The Queen~]

Who could this one be about? lol
I loved it! Very nice. Very powerful.

[Rain]

Spelling was good. This piece feels so sincere. It's the kind of poem I like. I hate love poems that have meanings it takes a scientist to figure out. Keep it simple. Good job. Rain..

[KieraCrimeScene]

This is very powerful. I like this one alot. =]

[THE LOST ROSE]

Simplistic yet powerful and straight to the point. What woman or man wouldn't want to hear those words spoken from someone heart. You just created a blue-print that we are should follow. Very creative. Thanks for sharing your gift as a writer.

[Ali]

I really like this, very to the point and the wording flows nicely.