Rapture

Its just a poem i wrote

only those who see the true meaning to be

will ever understand the meaning of me.

Open up let me in

and i promise this beginning is your final end.

Encase me in your love Drown me in your sorrows

There willnever be an end to all the maybe tomorrows.

Join hand in hand and pain will let lose to bleed

Pleasure rocks trough the veins as he fills the fertile with the seed

temptation and pain are too close to depart

religion and seduction are taught from the start

Hear the last breaths seep in and escape

poor virgin child forever knows the concept of rape.

Watching from a distance, sinister glee spread wide

Even through death this monstrosity can not hide

Forever ratured to the core of this existence

only to be measured by ones will of persistance

Dont consider sinning oh child of the savior

Your punishment will determine by your religious behavior

corruption and mutulation

seduction and temptation

blood and revelations

Your lifes combination.

Author's Note

i havent spell checked it yet and im gonna come back and modify it later. but here's the jist of it.

Reviews

[WayOath]

Uh...woah...that's all I can do is say woah. I mean ma, this is so deep and it ryhmes so well. You are the best at writing poems...you are the master and the credit I willfully bestow upon you. You never cease to amaze me, and by the way. Your poetry is unlike any other. I actually wanted to read this from the very start. I love my mall.

Love,

Pa

[Adam Lebzo -RonninWarri..]

Very nice
Liked it!

[Crow]

I like the rhythm, the choice of words that offer a hint of darkness, and how it provokes the reader to think.

Well done.

[Jane Doe]

u don't cease to astound me of poetry so beautiful i am young an hopefully will increase within time but till than my POETRY SUKZ BUTTT!!!!!!!!! really luv ya'll both ma an pa

[These Haunted Hallways]

Indeed, very deep and thought-provoking. Idk, but im guessing what it's talking about is that even though this person has been thru so much in life, they take a vow to never go down that same path of destruction or commit the exact sins that were done onto them. I think it's a great poem, great job! :)

B.A.