Nightmares Run Deep

just a poem. poped in my head. wanted to write it down.

Straight from hell
My nightmare turns Real
Anything but pain
Is a pleasure to feel

You once said you loved me
You once said you cared
You once said to love you
But only if i dared

I dared a little to late
I took to long to wait
You've now closed that gate
Maybe it was fate.

My nightmare from hell arises
As you look me in the eyes
You rip my heart to pieces.
As i realize your lies.  

You say you no longer love me
You say you no longer care
You say i love her instead
You took to long to dare

You say it hurts too much
To talk to me any longer
You say you dont wanna mess this up.
So i need to be stronger

My heart jumps at your presence
It races at your voice
Its so powerful my body trembles
Its impossible to ignore the noise

You wasted your time
Now i love you all wrong
But the funny thing is
Later you'll say, "i've wanted you all along"

Then what will i do?
Give you my heart that you wont deserve?
what happens if your too late?
Will you even have the nerve?

Youve crushed me now.
Yet i still love you with my all.
And if  you asked for another chance, 
My fortress would fall.

Build it up, Tear it down, 
Its yours for the take
Please keep in mind not to wait
Just for my sake.

My nightmare plays over
Again and again
Those memories that never happened
never seem to end.
 

Author's Note

tell me what you think.

Reviews

[HorrorMaster]

Amazing work, very dark and creepy. I love it. :)

[Frozen Alone]

wow this is awesome sara you should show me some more of yours cusi know their not all on here

[Wildecat]

I think this is a phenominal poem, very well written and a definite pleasure to read.

[DarkAngelWriter]

Hm. This is about a boy. And I know which boy. :)

Lol.


Stay strong. Keep clean. Sleep, s**t, short, and breathe. You'll be okay. You just gotta get through the rough patch. I promise, things'll get easier with time.

[These Haunted Hallways]

OMG!!!!!!!!! WOH, that twist at the end made me jump out of my seat!!! This was just brilliant hun. Damn, u were good with this one! I saw everything, and felt it completely. This was really awesome. The whole poem i loved. Totally goin in my fav's hehe. Awesome job!! :)

B.A.