The Night

dark and cold.shadows.

It's dark and cold.There's shadows everywhere.Holding this knife in my hand....I want to disappear.I drag the blade across my wrist watching the blood pour out.Why can it not all just end?I want it to.I can no longer take the pain.It hurts.It's freezing on the inside.I can not feel anything.The pain intensifies.I scream but no one can hear.I am invisible and it sucks!!I'm asking for help from everyone I know but no one hears.Can no one understand?What do I do now?

Reviews

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

Hi Terra, sad poem, sad girl .. Strong writing ... i know i can understand.. nice way to let it out.

Chloe

[Linear]

Dont give up, just hold on to your dreams, fling that knife far far away, your blood is precious just like you, think of all the people that love and need you, your dad, sisters and mom too.........and many others who think about you lovingly, I do hope this was just you writing well, a dream fantasy, you're not invisible to me :O)