The Actress

She was an actrees,
she played her part well,
Her part: A very happy girl,
One of the happiest in the world.
The teasing,
The laughing,
it didnt bother her.
No one would have guessed,
her true feelings were masked.
no one could see,
her pain,
her agony.
She was an Actress.
Every night she would cry,
Hoping she would die.
Every day she would fake a smile,
try to laugh it all away.
But the happiness wouldnt stay,
She was an actress.
No one saw what was planned,
untill it was too late.
They found her note,
her last wills.
They found her in the bathroom,
with the bottle of pills.
She was an actress,
she played her part well.

Author's Note

Ignore grammar and/or spelling.

Reviews

[Wolfwind]

Society has seen this played out more times than it should. To many pressures on the young and impressionable of Hollywood. It's tragic when it comes down to scenes like this. I felt you brought it across well with your words.
I would suggest changing to an easier to read color. Would make for a better reading experience. =)
Thanks for sharing your ink!

Aaron - Wolfwind

[Amber]

Yeah sorry I copied it from my blog and the color stuck and i couldn't figure out how to change it xc Thanks :)

[Catlen]

It is a wonderful piece of work. Truly sentimental.

If I may make a suggestion, though. Please consider changing the color of the font, it's really not that easy to read it. Light blue is a nice color but it's tiring to the eye. :)))

[Amber]

Yeah sorry I copied it from my blog and the color stuck and i couldn't figure out how to change it xc

[Amber]

Thanks though!

[Piro]

I can really relate to the premise of being an actress in your life pretending all is good. And the last line is really effective, last lines always need to be! Really great meter and a wonderful poem overall.