Forever Changing

Continuously altering our future...this piece was a 1 minute creation in my head (it came out of nowhere pretty much)

Yesterday,
We jumped through the loopholes of our existance
We skipped down the beaches of our mind
Yesterday,
We altered our own timeline
Today,
We grab at the impossible

Author's Note

Randomly made itself in my mind...

Reviews

[Light]

i love this, it explains the very essence of life!

[Twistedme]

Thanks, glad you enjoyed this small piece (:

[Alm]

...I cannot write like this in under a minute. Too indecisive. I end up rewriting and scrapping.

The poem stays true to its title, yet, somehow it also doesn't. To me, dreams (and other things) are inside all of us, it's there--just waiting to happen, so there isn't any change because it was actually just there.

Woohoo fate and destiny have loopholes.

-Alm

[Twistedme]

Thanks :) though this poem is about how humans act through todays society...we feed to make ourselves and to create a better tomorrow where we will last forever......

[Alm]

Oh. That's an interesting way of looking at it.

I shath read again with this new knowledge.

-Alm

[Twistedme]

Awesome :D I hope you see it in a different form now hhaha xF

[Mark D]

Intriguing little piece. I take from this that what was once easy and accessible has become impossible to obtain and our fault is in continuing to try while neglecting new paths.

Good work

[Twistedme]

Thanks dude

[Tai Ryens]

Could have done better near the ending in my honest opinion. Though, referring to the past, you've done a good job. Strive for better~

[Twistedme]

oh tai you're such a crtic haha :z

[Tai Ryens]

Quite the self centered prick as well!

[Twistedme]

Haha nah i enjoy your criticism but remember that most of my creations are made within a short amount of time haha like my last two, they both took like a minute each to write xD enjoy!

[Twistedme]

btw when I say "we grab at the impossible" I mean (in one way) that we are trying to obtain things that were said are impossible, like imortality, there are scientists who believe they can create imortailty through a process called de-aging which inwhich they believe they can create a way to reverse aging....yup thats just one way to see it haha xP

[Tai Ryens]

Reversing age? What, so I could shrivel up, shrink, crawl back into my mother's womb and deform? I'd sooner convert to satanism than believe a lie out of their prideful lips.
Though, with your vague ending, it could be assigned to quite anything in this world; depending on personal values and so . . .

[Twistedme]

Indeed, it can be read so many ways. Oh yes, but possibly no...I'm sure no one wants to age that far back haha also yes to this just being a theory of mad men xD

[Tai Ryens]

Next we know; every human standing in line for eternal youth dies of lethal injection of Botox.

[Twistedme]

xD