Those Eyes

Those Eyes

A Poem by Twistedme
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A sad piece, was bored so i wrote this. Took about 5 minutes to write.

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Alone in this melancholy world
Battered by the waves of judgement
I feel the glare of penetrating eyes
Piercing my mind and soul
Crippling my thoughts
I read your face like a book
Burning unwanted thoughts into my mind
Why do you have to be so cruel
Why do you have to make me feel like this
 
I try to bury my head in the sand
Hoping for these thoughts to fade
Crushed beneath the weight of society
Squeezing the air from my lungs
I hide myself behind this curtain
Hoping for you to go away
Waiting for this nightmare to end
Waiting...
Waiting...
Will it ever end?

© 2012 Twistedme


Author's Note

Twistedme
I like to write about different things to appeal to different audiences, hoping this will catch me some reviews. Tell me what you think thanks

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This is awesome! :D I write my poems in around the same amount of time too hahaha but this is awesome and you were right about your songs being able to be turned into songs :D I had a tune in my head as I was reading it :3 This is great and has feeling in it :D awesome work!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Twistedme

12 Years Ago

This review made my day, thanks :)
tanaya

12 Years Ago

Glad I could do that :D No problemo mateyo :D



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Your wait is over, I'm here, breathing you new air, invigorate from your moribund gasp - believe, believe, believe

Posted 12 Years Ago


Twistedme

12 Years Ago

I look forward to reading what you create :D
This is awesome! :D I write my poems in around the same amount of time too hahaha but this is awesome and you were right about your songs being able to be turned into songs :D I had a tune in my head as I was reading it :3 This is great and has feeling in it :D awesome work!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Twistedme

12 Years Ago

This review made my day, thanks :)
tanaya

12 Years Ago

Glad I could do that :D No problemo mateyo :D

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Added on August 9, 2012
Last Updated on August 9, 2012
Tags: sad, alone, judged, pressure

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Twistedme
Twistedme

New Zealand



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I'm a 19 year old male who loves the rush of music (playing, listening and writing) . I play the piano and guitar and love listening to music (hard rock, metal, industrial etc) I like to write lyrics,.. more..

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