Bland Knife

What part of me do you hate
Upon our meet did over rate

Which twist of tongue has caused the fail
Of summer wind from lusty sail

Though sight of flesh did find a thrill
A heart in kind feels empty chill

Was seeing my humanity
A bland knife to you fantasy?

Reviews

[huntsman]

Good... but too depressive

[Twisted Words (Tom)]

Yes, I do take this direction at times. I appreciate recieving its impact on readers.

[huntsman]

Then.... you take the right way...