Wounded

Wounded

A Poem by Twistd1
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Loves lasting Destruction...

"

The vision I'm left with, implanted with sorrow and pain-

an ever-lasting echo, runs rampant thru my veins.

        ______________________

Worse than a nightmare-except Im awake,

Every little part of me, is what you did take.

    _______________________

Destroyed my soul, laughed, walked away,

wounded and damaged, is a typical day.

    _________________________

Alone amoungst millions,  I motion thru life,

recalling the day, that I loved being your wife.

 

 

Twistd1

 

 

© 2009 Twistd1


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a very deep piece ..felt the emotion in this alot... overall i thought this was a very impressive write..nice job!!!

Posted 15 Years Ago


A very powerful emotional poem which really touched my heart deep down, i can't imagine how much pain this must cause a person unless i have been there myself,well i have ofcourse like many tasted the bitter-sweet relationship and walked the lonely slow death of divorce and felt that total isolation and desolation from those who called themselves my friends.
Your poem was beautifully written and deserves to receive serious critical acclaim because for whatever reasons there are in this cruel world for others to make their decisions we have to remember sometimes they are made in haste and will no doubt repent at leisure for the special people in our lives only come once.Thanks for sharing

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Hard to get over something we desire. Can feel alone and Ok with it. A sad and powerful poem. You said so much in so few words.
Coyote

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a beautiful, and inspirational poem. Good job!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on December 7, 2009

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