Dancing Sun

I'm so happy spring is on the way..

Lightly it caresses 

Everything unhidden in shadow

With it it brings blue skies

Happy days

Warm summers

And nights

It nurtures every living thing

Bringing it color

And Life

Bringing it breath, bringing it warmth

It rises over mountains

And sets over the seas

It dances in the summer

And sleeps in the winter

We bath in it

It strengthens us

It brings with it all things good

And keeps away the cold and colorless

I dance in it

Feeling it's warmth 

And how it makes my skin tingle 

I laugh at the way it dances across the water

I smile at how makes green come up in all places

I lay in the green

As it caresses everything unhidden in shadow..

Author's Note

It's very short..but..today was is just a beautiful day and I felt the need to write something about it...
It's not very good but, like I said, I just wanted to write something. :)

Reviews

[MAC]

wonderful write and imagery

[J.S. Pua]

good write..
i kind of like the imagery in here..

i find this line pretty creative:

"I laugh at the way it dances across the water
I smile at how it makes green come up in all places"

good work..

[Jessica]

i thought it was really nice.
short isnt always bad (: great things come in small packages remember =P
it is lovely (: and very visual (:

[Antonio Valentino]

And write something you did Lauren, this was sweet. That's what poets do, they put their feelings into words, just like you did so nicely today.

Don't ever think about, just do it okay. You're a natural.
Antonio

[Alex Zynder]

i like images as well, good writing

[deeps]

I think this is a wonderful write here. Amazing write, It's cute!

[Stephen Churchill]

incredibly visual. short isn't always a bad thing.

[_thesovo]

This is a ... form a cute that's just plain sweet.

[Saturn's Lover]

Aw that was sweet, i enjoyed it